Regarding your second response, why does Ponyboy run away? Remember, his parents are dead. I would think that this would make rifts with other family members more traumatic. Anyhoo, I think that your 2nd and 3rd responses are your strongest. I like that you start by making your point and then fully explain it. Not a lot of plot rambling going on.
Sharne - 5/5 Responses
Very developed responses. They need an ounce of fine tuning, but good job overall.
Diera - 5/5 Responses
Nice job D. I'm reading a novel involving kidnapping also. I think your 2nd response is your strongest, although I like the one about your old friend too.
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